Cute. The 'who will he choose?' tension was lost when Seth was revealed to be an utter asshole but there were some sweet moments between Chris and Alex. And, while the sex was hot and well-written, there was sooo much of it. Some of those scenes could have made way for some 'showing' of the development of Alex and Chris' relationship (there was a lot of 'telling').
jules0623
jules loves m/m fiction, is a sucker for romance, enjoys playing detective, and loves a bit of erotica. She has an unhealthy obsession with her Kindle.
Cute. The 'who will he choose?' tension was lost when Seth was revealed to be an utter asshole but there were some sweet moments between Chris and Alex. And, while the sex was hot and well-written, there was sooo much of it. Some of those scenes could have made way for some 'showing' of the development of Alex and Chris' relationship (there was a lot of 'telling').
