Right Side of the Tracks
Okay, so forget the weak and contradictory characterisations, forget the time jumps, the choppy plot, the poorly structured sentences, and the unrealistically extreme situations (sleeping for 4 days with no food or water? Really?), I just couldn't get over the casual mention of the MC being forced to 'perform his husbandly duties' by his wife - who knew he was gay and unwilling but told him that "she had to make sacrifices and so did he for their son". Ew.
