This short story - as good as it was - could have benefited from being either a lot longer or a bit shorter. There were two porny flashbacks which were unnecessary and which kind of took away from the emotion and intimacy of the actual reunion because we'd seen it already. Take these out and the story would have benefited. On the other hand, if this was a novella, we could have kept the flashbacks but had a bit more build up to the reunion which would have given a 'hard fought for' feeling to the scenes were they'd come together again.Either way, I loved the premise of this story and the writing was great. I liked both the MCs and was rooting for them to get back together.
